Sunday, September 11, 2011

No it isn’t heart breaking. It fails to satisfy my metaphorical needs.
The shattering and picking up shards of a broken “heart” doesn’t work for me.

I feel shot.
Shot at my chest.
And my gut.

9 comments:

Ankur said...

Very few things actually fit these conventions...
Loved the apt use of the phrase "metaphorical needs" here!!

Blasphemous Aesthete said...

Next time, keep them in a chest and lock it away. There is no pain in a place which is not where it is supposed to be.

Why so sad?


Blasphemous Aesthete

Beauty and the BEast said...

that's painful...

I am glad writing helps you vent it out...

Dory The Fish said...

Hmmm.. Really liked your blog.. Felt it was quite honest.. Will go through all of it now.. Cheers!

Dory The Fish said...

Hmm.. Really liked your blog.. Felt it was quite honest.. Will go through all the posts now.. Cheers!

Dory The Fish said...

Hmm.. Really liked your blog.. Felt it was quite honest.. Going through all the posts now.. Bye!

Hopelessly Flawed said...

@Ankur
yea...metphorical needs change dramatically with time.

@Blasphemous Aesthete
yea..i don't carry the bullets in my chest and gut...but yes the wounds have healed...leaving scars that make me uniquely beautiful and hopelessly flawed at the same time.

y so sad???
hmmmm tell me and we'll both know;-)

@Beauty and the BEast
hi...welcome to my blogs.
yea writing..helps.

@dory the fish
welcome to my blog.:)
hope going through it wasnt a total waste f time.

MothSmokeLover said...

But getting shot in the gut... now isn't that the best feeling ever? :)

Sh@s said...

The wound may have dried but it still bleeds inside. Hope things take a better turn for you. Take care.